Your imagery is amazing. Sometimes I don't really understand what you're saying but there is a constant similarity of feeling in your poems. "A poem should not mean but be" is a favorite quote of mine. So it is not as important that the reader understand as read and be somehow changed because of what was read. Direction..." and there! four pronghorn" I see that. "... foam flecks flying" I see that too. Please try some 5-7-5 Haiku. I'm sure you will amaze yourself and others.
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Your imagery is amazing. Sometimes I don't really understand what you're saying but there is a constant similarity of feeling in your poems. "A poem should not mean but be" is a favorite quote of mine. So it is not as important that the reader understand as read and be somehow changed because of what was read. Direction..." and there! four pronghorn" I see that. "... foam flecks flying" I see that too.
Please try some 5-7-5 Haiku. I'm sure you will amaze yourself and others.
Thank you.
Apparently I don't think in haiku. I've tried them, but never like the result.
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