I open my mouth and a sound comes out
Yours are too long, the pauses. But, I suspect that you are writing volumes but just not posting them.I like this "deck" poetry. Caesura, the pause between. Is that kind of like Que Sera, Sera (Whatever Will Be, Will Be)? ...
it's a musical notation--a pause in the musicI've not been writing at all, only reading what you and some other favorite bloggers posted
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