Tuesday, May 11, 2010

I
the viewpoint roofed
and crowded with visitors
posing, chattering
ignoring the view
which anyway was dusty...

II
she let illness
wipe her glasses
a brighter sun
came shining through...

2 comments:

farmlady said...

At first I didn't understand the last part. So I read it and thought about having cancer when I was 39 yrs old.
This IS what happen. The illness made my world "brighter". My life "came shining through..."
How astute your are.
Sometimes our view of what happens to us gets "dusty".

farmlady said...

Please... I didn't proof read my comment. I meant "So I read it (again) and....".