Thursday, March 13, 2008

too intense, the yellow

plastic ruffle, formal frill
every year the daffodil

doesn’t he/she understand
here, in California
we’re more laid back?

(Her doctor was of the opinion
that she had brought her anxiety attacks
to the wrong state)


farmlady said...

Wow! You may think that all your poetry needs is a "reader" but, it's all worthy of publishing. Really!

castlewon said...

Thank you so much! (but in the "official verse culture" my poems do not anywhere near measure up)(worth blogging though)
Did you try my other link? It's my year-old (this month) blog on a German "blogsite". At the very beginning there are even some lines about chickens. :-)